Temper has frayed,
All but played out,
Ready to stop
Angry and ageing.
Tired of raging.
ageing, depressed, fading, old, poem, poetry, tired
June 23, 2014 at 10:50 pm
Love how you used the word “stop” multiple times. (BTW, I found you browsing the poetry tag on wordpress.)
June 23, 2014 at 10:54 pm
I like how the poem builds and suddenly ebbs away, a lot like emotions do. Keep writing, you are really good!
June 23, 2014 at 10:56 pm
Thank you, I will try.
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